Phillip Booth: "On the far side/of the storm/window." The break is used as a trick to interrupt the flow of the poem and call attention to the cleverness of its author.
Are there any antidotes to the workshop syndrome? Dooley knows that little can be done about the larger cultural trends and
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smaller academic imperatives that foster mediocrity. But he does have a few hints for buddins McPoets. Avoid obvious cli-
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ches, such as the "adjective noun of noun" formula....